Preacher

Hey guys, I saw a Facebook post on a tech page I follow that mentioned folks that just drop off the face of the Earth to never be heard from again. Well since I suck and did just that, I thought I would drop in and say hey. Since my last post I have pastored a church near Kansas City, Mo. for 2 years and have now moved south and Pastored a church for the last 5 years to Beeville, Tx. My daughter (Legolas) is an e-7 and head Crew Chief on the Stealth Bomber in the Air Force and my son Christian (Titanium) still plays CS:S and GO and is a manager at a large apartment complex. I still game but mostly single player stuff. I do play a 1rst person rpg called Infestation that's pretty fun from time to time Picture is from FragFest 04 still [VI] Preacher Blessings fellas

Yeah I was capable of writing as far back as 30 years ago but it is a daunting task to write the first word and purpose to make it to completion. I wrote it all in two weeks about a year ago. I have been revisiting it about every 3-4 months and revising it and changing stupid mistakes. I've had several test read it but I need a critical eye that understands the creative process and not just corrects my grammar. I know fantasy and fantasy readers will find every plot-hole, complain about anything that doesn't make sense and spot every mistake. Fantasy is all about the small details This is why I am seeking help before I shop it around and have them tell me it still needs work lol. It's 86500 words aprox. so this is not a proof read of a short story.

Hey guys, it's been a long time! I'm still pastoring, now in Texas. My CS days are long behind me but my kids carry on the tradition lol. Anyway I wrote a book. I know it's sort of a long shot but does anyone know someone who is an experienced copy/creative editor for large projects and won't kill me with cost? I'm wrapping up my third and final self edit in the next day or two and then will need someone who understands the ebb and flow of the fantasy genre to rip me a new one lol. Thanks in advance

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Predator

Sickness

Cheese

Simmon's Beauty Rest

Southern Beverages

hiccups

Bullwinkle

Viking

Cavalry

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