LiquidSide January 13, 2003 Share LiquidSide Member January 13, 2003 Breaking the Rhythm He wants to change, But doesn't know how. He’s trying to get there, Cuz he’s leaving now. Breaking the Rhythm His life is over, Its gone down the drain. He lost his wife, his kids, Nothings left to gain. Breaking the Rhythm He lies his head down, Closes his eyes. He won't wake up again, He prays he’s going to die. Breaking the Rhythm He wakes in the morning, Notices the light. He’s amazed to see, Everything’s alright. Breaking the Rhythm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest UberNewb January 13, 2003 Share Guest UberNewb Guests January 13, 2003 *snap snap snap snap* groovy man. Sounds real personal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest The Hurricane January 13, 2003 Share Guest The Hurricane Guests January 13, 2003 nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playaa January 13, 2003 Share Playaa Member January 13, 2003 I like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Slayer January 14, 2003 Share Shadow Slayer Member January 14, 2003 hmmm. maybe ill post some of my poems i mean if he can do it so can i right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playaa January 14, 2003 Share Playaa Member January 14, 2003 yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Slayer January 15, 2003 Share Shadow Slayer Member January 15, 2003 Within a sea of greeny-black whos rippled writhings rocked my bed my tiny form in sleep lay slack a cloak of green encasing red i lay content within my lair and quietly became aware my once vast sea was now a cell its brutal sides surrounding all and did it shrink or did it swell against its tight restraining wall when as my frantic struggles ceased and in the stillness once again the weight of crushing pressure eased upon my wall a crack began again upon an endless sea of waving fronds and bending treas i watch the world surrounding me as they and i sway in the breeze the pulsing currents rythmic song quickened its pace and urged me on and somehow pushing me along gave one last surge and then was gone a warming glow came shining through and pulled me towards it while i grew S.S. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Slayer January 15, 2003 Share Shadow Slayer Member January 15, 2003 ill post some more if i can remeber any of them. its been a while since ive written anything and i dont have them with me so i have to rely on my memory. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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