Guest Orbital August 1, 2003 Share Guest Orbital Guests August 1, 2003 (edited) Every intricate bit of information traveling at light-speeds, The factors of this continuum aren’t comprehendible to most, The instigating violence, the masks of shame, The bitter protocols that run the mind of so many, Callow chards of human dignity float in the wake of this monster, The minds of millions, with an adhesive to their phalanges, I claim this world, a lost planet, floating in the ashes of it’s own demise. A self-destruct protocol insights the implosion, A countdown to infinity, A fog of pride and power covers the desolate lands, A primary, a secondary, pistols shot, explosions heard, A world of hatred and microphones, A child is lost in the world of nothing, A lemming, leaps off the BOD, hoping to catch the tide. Shallow waters are a warning, Do not trust what lies beneath the surface, Trust nothing, for the lies and spies of this existence shall rob, Kleptomaniacs, pathological liars, murders steal the scene, Daily, millions are cast aside on the painful blade, The moments where lines across are drawn into a life, Moments pass, time corrodes, how many hours have past? Thrust the moment, capsulate the emotion. Stand up and believe in what is true. Now is the time, where nothing means everything, This is the drift, where the very ending justifies the means, Stay alive, listen for the bell, and rush the field, Keep moving, never stop, never show mercy. I am he, I ph33r nothing, This is my time, I will be heard. I wrote this a bit ago, wondered what you all thought. I write a lot, I know some of you have read my work, wondered if you would read this and tell me what you all think. Thank you. Edited August 1, 2003 by Orbital Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Orbital August 14, 2003 Share Guest Orbital Guests August 14, 2003 No one liked my Counter-Strike poem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gOOters August 14, 2003 Share gOOters Member August 14, 2003 nice orb!...hi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoMamma August 14, 2003 Share YoMamma Member August 14, 2003 lol I didnt even see this topic. nice effort on the poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playaa August 14, 2003 Share Playaa Member August 14, 2003 I read it in the past, enjoyed it. where you been Orbitz? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Orbital August 15, 2003 Share Guest Orbital Guests August 15, 2003 I'm at the University of Southern California (USC) now -- taking corporate business with a minor in journalism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rackish August 15, 2003 Share rackish Member August 15, 2003 I'm at the University of Southern California (USC) now -- taking corporate business with a minor in journalism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xterminator August 15, 2003 Share Xterminator Member August 15, 2003 awesome poem dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hambone August 16, 2003 Share Hambone Member August 16, 2003 Deviant forgot to wear his furry tag lol. GG poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffe August 17, 2003 Share Jeffe Member August 17, 2003 Nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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