Laz.e.rus October 30, 2006 Share Laz.e.rus Member October 30, 2006 Yes, its poetry. Yes, Laz posted it. Yes, Mindy even warned me Ill prolly get razzed because 'I' am posting poetry. But what can I say. She amazes me. I used to think I was pretty creative and could write. Then I read stuff like this. She hasnt titled it yet: ---------------------------------------------------- I have been here before. The color of knowing that drips from my tongue when I slide inside this dreamspace of truth and beauty. Everything is sweet where you emanate. Your voice is a calling into memory. The last sliver of late October moon butters our shoulders in a cool blue surrender as we crunch through the icy wheat toward dawn. Rising sun draws us to the celebration circle. Swirl of our crisp mingled breath conjures a chant. A familiar secret unfolds, becomes a hum in an ancient ear. Hypnotic flute charms praise our reunion. Birds of youth at our feet. In the golden clearing age dances away smiling and bows, fails to ever touch us. I have been here before. Left many lives but went on loving you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laz.e.rus October 30, 2006 Author Share Laz.e.rus Member October 30, 2006 This is Mindy. He doesn't know I'm posting this. I think he's just silly. I told him not to post my girlie poetry in this big tough guy forum. He's a nutter I tell you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonymo October 30, 2006 Share anonymo Member October 30, 2006 Wow...that was excellent! My fav line is The last sliver of late October moonbutters our shoulders in a cool blue surrender as we crunch through the icy wheat toward dawn. You paint a beautiful picture...what are you doing with laz? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EbilDustBunny October 30, 2006 Share EbilDustBunny GC Alumni October 30, 2006 I told him not to post my girlie poetry in this big tough guy forum. big tough guy forum? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boiler October 30, 2006 Share boiler Member October 30, 2006 I told him not to post my girlie poetry in this big tough guy forum. big tough guy forum? IndEEd... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackieChan October 30, 2006 Share JackieChan GC Alumni October 30, 2006 I told him not to post my girlie poetry in this big tough guy forum. big tough guy forum? lol, that must make ebil a half of a guy to hang out with us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xterminator October 30, 2006 Share Xterminator Member October 30, 2006 (edited) nah, Laz is just intouch with his feminine side more than we are. in a big tough guy kinda way Edited October 30, 2006 by Xterminator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArmyG November 1, 2006 Share ArmyG Member November 1, 2006 Or, maybe this "Mindy wrote it" thing is just a cover. What if Laz really did write the poem and he's afraid to admit it to you people? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
farmerisme November 1, 2006 Share farmerisme Member November 1, 2006 Or, maybe this "Mindy wrote it" thing is just a cover. What if Laz really did write the poem and he's afraid to admit it to you people? Interesting theory. Either way, I do not understand poetry. It always just seems like jumbled words to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EbilDustBunny November 1, 2006 Share EbilDustBunny GC Alumni November 1, 2006 Or, maybe this "Mindy wrote it" thing is just a cover. What if Laz really did write the poem and he's afraid to admit it to you people? lol it's a conspiracy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laz.e.rus November 2, 2006 Author Share Laz.e.rus Member November 2, 2006 wow....This is what I get for not checkin on this thread in a couple days eh? rofl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EbilDustBunny November 2, 2006 Share EbilDustBunny GC Alumni November 2, 2006 wow....This is what I get for not checkin on this thread in a couple days eh? rofl indEEd that IS what you get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
discom November 2, 2006 Share discom Member November 2, 2006 Laz is a girl??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anonymo November 2, 2006 Share anonymo Member November 2, 2006 Laz is a girl??? Don't get your hopes up, she has a girlfriend named Mindy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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